高中英语短文改错----高手帮忙

高中英语短文改错----高手帮忙
短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.没处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school.I
was having trouble getting along with my parents.I had about fifty dollars in their pockets,
so I thought about leaving home.It spent me only two weeks away from home while I started
to feel homesick.Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons:
being more responsible,more decisive and more creative.Because of I’m on my own,I get to
deal with my duties without told.I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to
give me their advices.In the other hand,I could make my own future plan.I have made rules
for me to follow. smile_j 1年前他留下的回答 已收到2个回答

haoavi 网友

该名网友总共回答了22个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：81.8%

The first time I decide to leave home was that when I was upon graduation in high school.I
was having trouble and getting along with my parents.I had gotten about fifty dollars from their pockets,
so I thought about leaving home.It spent me only two weeks leave home while I started
to feel homesick.Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons:
being more responsible,more decisive and more creative.Because I’m on my own,I get to
deal with my duties without told.I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to
give me their advices.In the other hand,I could make my own future plan.I have made rules
for me to follow.
改好了

1年前他留下的回答

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踏血 网友

该名网友总共回答了25个问题，此问答他的回答如下：采纳率：84%

The first time I decide to leave home was that when I was upon graduation in high school. I
was having trouble and getting along with my parents. I had gotten about fifty dollars from their pocke...

1年前他留下的回答

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